Tuesday 20 November 2018

Moment in time





The image I see is a fine blue sunny day. With a huge light green island. Looking closely to the image something that looks like a patch of sand on the right side behind the kayaker. The kayaker is not alone since you can see two people behind him in a mintie green canoe and a yellow cone bright as a daffildo must be a tourist with his friends or family or just people he met.

The tourist man is exploring the ocean to see what he could find or just something to have a new excuse with seeing sea creatures. While the tourist was kayaking the man might of saw something shine underwater with something pale pink and a creamy white in the sea creatures in its mouth. Because the ocean water looks so clean blue, the tourist man could see sea animals swimming around and what they are doing. Suddenly a shiny seal came closer and closer with the pale pink, creamy white octopus that had popped out of the water fast as lighting hitting the tourist in the face.

It felt like he got in a fight with people and one of them hit the tourist in the face so hard, but in reality it’s just war between the octopus and a seal. A tourist man would've tasted the salted clean ocean water that the shine black seal had slashed on to him. He would’ve felt the sticky slimy octopus sliding down his face, with the sucker cups popping of his body.

My Group's collaborative piece of writing
In my group we had to describe the above picture and we did a joint Moment in Time piece of writing together. In my group I worked with AJ and Melita.
This is our collaborative work collaborative writing

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